Hi Dominique, What an awesome piece of writing. As you were reading I could picture the setting clearly in my head! I'm guessing that Nick is in a cave? What is he going to do now? I hope that he doesnt get lost! Sharing your writing using Screencastify is a great way to hook in your audience because they can hear your expression as you read it. Well done, thanks for sharing!
Hi Dominique You have done some great descriptive writing and used awesome adjectives. I think that Nick is at a cave. Let me know if my answer is right. Tulei
Hi Dominique,
ReplyDeleteWhat an awesome piece of writing. As you were reading I could picture the setting clearly in my head! I'm guessing that Nick is in a cave? What is he going to do now? I hope that he doesnt get lost! Sharing your writing using Screencastify is a great way to hook in your audience because they can hear your expression as you read it. Well done, thanks for sharing!
Hey Great work and great expression
ReplyDeleteHi Dominique
ReplyDeleteYou have done some great descriptive writing and used awesome adjectives. I think that Nick is at a cave. Let me know if my answer is right.
Tulei