I really enjoyed reading your colour poem! You have lots of great words in your poem that helped me to create a picture in my head. Remember to check your spelling and punctuation before you share your work on your blog.
hi dominique i like how your taking about your favourite colour my favourite colour is green to. i also like the way you tolled us thining that are green
Kia Ora Dominique Von'zy from May Road School here. I like your favourite colour. And i liked your information report. And Dominique I Liked your Making putiputi And Dominique nice picture And Dominique I Liked your flowers of your Making putiputi. And a nice picture you And Amosa And Emeilanno.
Hi Dominique I like how you said "Green feels like the grass that we just stepped on". Maybe you could spell check it just to make sure you have the correct word. Tulei
Kia Orana Dominique I really loved you're Green Poem but I think you should check on it too see if it make sense but I love it its fantastic how you Described the Grass Green One!
Bula Vinaka Dominique!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your colour poem! You have lots of great words in your poem that helped me to create a picture in my head. Remember to check your spelling and punctuation before you share your work on your blog.
hi dominique
ReplyDeleteI realy like the poem you did with it. Mabey next time you should say why you like green
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hi dominique i like how your taking about your favourite colour my favourite colour is green to. i also like the way you tolled us thining that are green
ReplyDeleteHI I like your colour poem it was so interesting I also like fizzy to. what are your next step's? bye
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Dominique Von'zy from May Road School here. I like your favourite colour. And i liked your information report. And Dominique I Liked your Making putiputi And Dominique nice picture And Dominique I Liked your flowers of your Making putiputi. And a nice picture you And Amosa
ReplyDeleteAnd Emeilanno.
Hi Dominique
ReplyDeleteI like how you said "Green feels like the grass that we just stepped on". Maybe you could spell check it just to make sure you have the correct word.
Tulei
Kia Orana Dominique
ReplyDeleteI really loved you're Green Poem but I think you should check on it too see if it make sense but I love it its fantastic how you Described the Grass Green One!
Kind Regards: Heamapo
Hi Dominique
ReplyDeletei really loved how you
described the colours
using the colour green i
especially like your cricket one
Milika
Hi Dominique,
ReplyDeleteI Really Like How You Described Your Favourite Colour
I Made One Too
The Colour Is Gold
Keep Up The Great Work
Peace Out,
Valerie
hi Dominique i really like how you described your favourite colour green. you have some great word in your poem.
ReplyDeletekeep up the great work.
by Mehran